Is it funny ?
Would you say it strange ?
That you are both my sunshine
and my rain ?
My spirit leaps
My spirit falls
Frozen by your heart
My own ?
It feels as though I have but two
One warm, my smile, my laugh
The other...
simply
cold
But, I suppose, love moves on
It blossoms or it fades
I have lost you
Yet you're still there
Brightening up my day
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Its been a while since I've written aything but without my camera I have to divert my energies elsewhere. Let me know what you think. Comments / critiques greatly appreciated, don't be afraid to tell it straight ^^
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 I like how you question the duality, or possibly totality of love and relationships. And the fact that you can look back on a memory and not forget the good and bad. Its simple but the questions add depth. i enjoyed it. Very optimistic also, something i have been lacking.
-- "To keep the passion alive was to make war on comfort. He made war on the fears those around him sheltered. He made war in the pursuit of love." Thankyou x
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